The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your poem. I wonder how many of us have done the exact same thing!
To be so enraptured with HIM that we are not even touched by the re actions of others! Just like Jesus. HE was, HE did only what HE saw the Father do. How people re acted was their problem. We do not have to let others words, actions, behaviors affect us - it becomes easy when we learn to stay close to HIM.
01/25/08
A Poem! Right on topic.
Usually in poem, the first word in each line is capitalized, even if it isn't the first word in the sentence.
Good job...keep writing.
01/25/08
Awesome poem and great reminder to seek the Lord in how He wants us to witness using our gifts and personality to reach others for Him. God bless you and keep writing!!