The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like this story. It's very touching and yet, so true! How different the body of Christ would be if we simply chose to really love one another, and got our 'feelings' out of the ______ way!
01/25/08
Absolutely beautiful! I could just feel Mawmaw's hands hugging me. The message is so true, also. Love is a choice.
Great writing.
01/25/08
It is a very touching story. Serena is easy to identify with and Mamaw is so sweet.
01/26/08
Beautiful lesson. Love the voices of the two characters as they share their feelings and wisdom.
Great story! Very touching and well written! We can all learn a lesson from this.
This is a beautiful story. Congratulations on your highly commended!
Beautiful story Amanda! I love it when I can 'hear' the characters as I'm reading. Congratulations on your Highly Commended award!