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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Illustrate the meaning of “Don’t Try to Walk before You Can Crawl” (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (01/17/08)

TITLE: Who am I
By David Campbell
01/19/08


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Can the destination of of a child ever change.
Like lifes perception be rearranged.
What is real and what is a lie.
Can one without wings learn to fly.
What if friends were really foes.
Lost in what seems to be a dream he realizes that everyone knows.
Why am I here he waunders and what is it all for.
Was I traded at birth for a life of something more.
They hear his thoughts and they see his fear.
Because of this he trust knowone to come near.
Like a sponge he pulls things inside that he can not see.
Tormented day and night to live he waunders how can this be.
Because he beleived in a better kind of life to live.
He knelt and gave all he had to give.
To share a life filled with true love.
But instead things begin to push and shove.
Time seems to roll out in front of him.
And things begin to loose color and begin to grow dim.
Did he expect to much or want to much.
Now he waunders whats in his lunch.
So the day we walk or the day we crawl.
He waunders does it all matter really at all.


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Carol Shaffron01/24/08
You are much more than a Conqueror through Christ Jesus Who loves you and gives HIS life and strength to all.
Yes, LIFE is very different than what we may first imagine! We first need God to open our eyes to see HIM clearly-then it all does make sense. Blessings,
Shalah
Yvonne Blake 01/25/08
Very deep thinking!
With the help of a buddy to correct the spelling and puncutation, this could be great. PM me if you want help.
Great words and thoughts.