The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/08
Interesting method!
It was hard to know who was speaking without the quote marks. It was assumed that each new paragraph was a new speaker. I like to write with only dialogue too.
Good job...keep writing
A very eye opening article. I liked how it was written from a boss to employee perspective. It got the point across well in my opinion. Good job!
01/25/08
While the basic thoughts of this dialogue are true, I felt almost like it emphasized all that the Christian should be doing without referencing the way God says He will help you do His work. It seemed like there was nowhere to go at the end. The boss didn't seem very open to reconciliation to me. But it was an interesting and unique take on Christian service.
01/26/08
As I read your article, it reminded me of Job's encounter with God. Thanks for reminding me of God's desire for relationship with the created.