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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners Our Daily Devotional HERE Place it on your site or receive it daily by email. TRUST JESUS TODAY Share Tweet how it works   Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner) Topic: birthday (05/23/05) TITLE: Another Year (another birthday) By T. M. Lowry 05/24/05  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  ADD TO MY FAVORITES Hear the piper, time is calling – thy spirit dance draweth near Youth is but a passing season – laughing in a pool of tears Age is yet our mortal folly – embrace it not as something dear Time, it counts a clocks illusion – birthdays are simply another year PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com. If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel. This article has been read 509 times Member Comments Member Date Delores McCarter 05/30/05 Another Year, please give me more. You opened and quickly shut the door. You have the talent, that much I see, so please reveal those skills to me. (smile) Phyllis Inniss  05/31/05 I like "Youth is just a passing season". The poem reminds us of the fleetingness of time. Phyllis Inniss  05/31/05 Sorry, I misquoted. I put "just" instead of "but". Helga Doermer 05/31/05 Interesting imagery, such as the paradox 'laughing in a pool of tears'. Debbie OConnor 06/03/05 This entry has promise, but it isn't long enough. You need a minimum of 150 words to qualify for the challenge. I can see you have talent though, so please keep entering! :) dub W 06/04/05 Very clever and fun to read, albeit short. Deborah Porter  06/06/05 TML, I liked this. I loved the message in it and style. The only problem was, as some have pointed out already, that it was miles under the minimum word count limit allowed for Challenge entries. The word count rules for the Challenge are that all entries have to fall between 150 and 750 words. Anything outside those limits has to be disqualified - which is always a shame. Don't feel bad about it though - there are usually about about 5 or so people make this mistake each week, so you aren't alone. Anyway, please keep entering. You may be a Level 1 entrant, but you show a lot of potential. This was a good start - it just needed to be expanded a little. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)

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