The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/08
Wonderfully written!
I liked the way you showed his thoughts and doubts.
I was hoping it would end with a better job near his parents' house.
Good writing.
Very well written and so true to life I can almost see the problem as my own.

Yes I've been there, and done that and it really works.

Your article seems to say taste and see!