The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
I like it! I especially like the pack of bears and the herd of frogs! ;)
01/20/08
A fairytale!
I think it would have be stronger if you didn't explain it at the end.
Good job...keep writing.
01/21/08
lol ... too funny. I liked it! My one thought would be to leave the sister out ... the story had a nice ending with the Fargone wife. Keep at it! :-)