The Official Writing Challenge
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A touching story, thank you.
01/21/08
This is very well-written with a nice, touching twist at the end.
01/21/08
Ahhhh... how touching!
A little more description of Vera and the hospital would have helped.
I loved the ending.
Good writing.
01/21/08
One of my favorites! I wish I had thought of it. So good, and certainly on topic~
You forgot the tissue warning. This is beautiful, and I love the subtlety of the topic.