The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
Wonderful poem!
You illustrated the parable very well.
Good job...good writing
01/19/08
enjoyed. poetry always fascinates me
01/21/08
Creative idea for the topic and so true! I liked it.
I love rhyming poetry. I stumbled once or twice on the meter, but this is still very good. Thumbs up.