The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice article. Although there were some typos thoughout, it is a VERY promising piece. I could easily see this article in a Christian magazine with a young adult target audience, so please put it in your writer's portfolio! Good job!
That was a touching piece. There were a couple of tense changes, but it was still a nice read. Thumbs up!
05/31/05
Just think how one person can change your life or make a difference in it. Thanks to all the Jimmys out there. Enjoyed your story.
Psalm 139 has long been a favorite of mine. Very well done. I suggest that putting this article on the Critique Circle after the challenge might help you hone it into a more publishable work. You have a rough diamond here! :)