The Official Writing Challenge
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This took a lot of courage. You really put yourself out and I appreciate that. We all have fears in writing. We feel very exposed. Congratulations on over coming your fears! This is a very encouraging piece of work.
I could feel your heart beating in your words!
It is SCARY to put your writing out where others can see it, but what's the use of hiding it away?
Words are useless without readers.
You've taken a big step...take a breath, enjoy the thrill...and take another step.
Soon you'll be running marathons!
Keep it up!
the freedom that follows when we face our fears...nothing better!
"We are more than Conquerors through Christ Jesus Who strengthens us." Each victory makes us stronger and bolder. Keep writing.
I like the way you tie your ending in with your title. I could relate to your fears. A double space between paragraphs would take this one step up in being easier to read. Your vulnerability and authenticity is a blessing to me.
I agree with the comments about your bravery and vulnerability. Please know we are a close knit community of Christian writers who will embrace you with love and understanding, and in order for you to move up the ladder, even instruction and help when you need it. Please don't stop taking baby steps! You are going in the right direction. Keep on Keepin' on...your're doing fine! lg
I mean, "you're" :0)
I want to hug you. You've captured the emotion many of us have no doubt when we first submitted here. I might suggest that you leave a blank space between your paragraphs for easier reading. Keep sharing.
May I suggest a book-- I believe it is called The Dreamgiver. I believe it is written by Bruce Wilkinson but it's been a long time since I read it. It was what started me on my journey of writing. God Bless!