The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
I really liked this! The free verse at the beginning was well-done, and the devotional was interesting and well-paced.
01/10/08
A timely piece, with an important message. Love the free verse at the beginning. Not sure how "on topic" this is, but it could just be me not seeing it. I'll remember the image of "creation groaning." Good job.
01/11/08
This is a good devotional piece complete with references. I was not able to see how it illustrates the proverb topic, but this is still a good piece.
01/12/08
I love the imagery in the first few lines!
I would have liked to seen more of that. I had trouble seeing the topic.
Keep writing.
"Highly Commended"...
Beautiful writing...the topic isn't an issue...the issue is that you're making "some" of "us" look really bad...lol...dave...
01/18/08
Congratulations, Emily, on highly commended in beginners. By the way, your piece also placed 31st overall. Great job!