The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Interesting structure--it builds from 3-line stanzas, to 4 lines, to 5 at the climax, then back to 3 at the resolution. I like it.
01/12/08
Rahab! What a good job of telling her story!

The ryhthm was hard to follow and the number of lines in each stanza weren't uniform.

With a few more touches, this would be a great poem!
01/12/08
Ooops... I just noticed Jan's comment.
I guess I missed the progression when I read it the first time. Sorry!
Very interesting! Well done.
Oh, I like this one. The picture of taking a small step of faith (putting out a scarlet thread) and it having very large results (sparing Rahab's life), is really inspiring.
01/18/08
Congratulations, Shan, on placing 12th in level 1 with this piece. Great job!