The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
This is well-written and on topic--but I wish you'd used some of your leftover words to tell us about what some of those "lifetime mistakes" were. That might really bring this home for some readers.

Very true, and pleasant to read.
01/12/08
Yes, so sad that many young children don't know who God is.
It would have helped to be more specific about what you learned..."show instead of tell".
Keep writing.