The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
You packed a lot in here! You write well; shorten up some of those long sentences. Grammatical errors such as "you" instead of "your" become glaring when the rest of it reads very well.

This type of article is an excellent candidate for a magazine like Leadership Journal.
01/10/08
Very good job.
01/11/08
Well written. May God use you to help others.
Keep writing.
01/20/08
As a woman I thank you. This is an amazing article. I'm happy you are thinking of your small children. I wish the men in my life could read this (my husband and sons). Also makes me realize the tremendous attack and hold the emeny has on male and female. Thank you again. Keep writing.