The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
The windshield wipers were a good example. Other than being short on commas, this had a nice flow to it. I like how you ended--it added just the right punch. :)
01/10/08
Your article has a strong message.
The character is a little to rough on herself and could use an ego boost.
Try reading your article out loud when editing. Check out the message boards for a writing buddy.
Keep writing for Him.
01/11/08
Well-written devotional--thanks! (I never do the windshield wiper thing, either.)
01/11/08
This didn't go the way I thought it would. Good transition into your memory.
I noticed that you need to capitalize the first word in your quotes.
Good job...keep writing
01/15/08
Interesting piece, nice use of transitions; however, a little grammar work, perhaps a challenge buddy will make this a winner. Thanks for posting - I enjoyed the read.
01/15/08
Well done this is a good lesson
01/15/08
I'm a biker, you were a tough kid to not drop Grandpa's ride. Good job!