The Official Writing Challenge
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I like your story. It is a 'good' story in both expression and morale. Thank you. But I think it should be 'lightning'.
01/10/08
At least the tree didn't lie there for a long time before you remembered to all the tree service! Good job on this one.
01/11/08
Very well done!
01/11/08
Wow! What a miracle!
This is right on topic.
The last two paragraphs probably could have been left off and still kept the message.
Good job...Keep writing.
01/14/08
A clear illustration. Well done.
01/18/08
Congratulations, Judy, on placing 10th in level 1 with this entry. Great work!