The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
OH! You got me! I certainly didn't see that one coming! Good job. :)
01/10/08
I've been on trips like this!
I liked the surprise ending.
Keep writing!
01/11/08
This definitely has an allegorical feel to it, and was entertaining to read.
01/17/08
Congrats on 3rd place - great story, well told. I love the twist at the end. :)
01/18/08
Congratulations, Fiona, on your third place in beginners. By the way, your entry was also 30th overall. Great job!