The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
You surprised me! I thought it would be about "a trip to the woodshed". (smile)
Very good descriptions of the ice storm!
Keep writing
01/11/08
Great title, and highly entertaining story. I loved the image of the Great Dane and the daschund curling up together.

You probably don't need the last sentence...you've told the story very well. Trust your story-telling skills to impart the lesson to the readers, and don't summarize for them.

I felt chilly reading this--you did a great job.
01/15/08
Loved this highly descriptive story. Very vivid, great moral. To strengthen your writing try eliminating exclamation points. A couple of other minor things, but this is a well written piece. Thanks.
01/15/08
Well done! Very engaging story
01/18/08
Congratulations, Annie, on placing ninth in level 1. Great work!