The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Yes, it's the little things that matter.
Describing actual characters would help this story become real.
Keep writing.
This is all so true... even the littlest things, the things we think are so mundane, really do matter, and especially in relationships. Thank you for the reminder.
01/10/08
A good point that was clearly presented. Well done.
01/11/08
How absolutely true!! Very good idea for this subject!
01/11/08
True--now give it some "punch" by giving a personal example.
Ahh, the reality of this is only too painful as relationships have been lost by those who hurt others and even when told, will let the relationship go.

You presented this well.
01/11/08
Beautiful and so true. Thank you.