The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/07
Good story for teens!

It needs quite a bit of attention to punctuation--perhaps someone can help you proofread before submission?

There's nothing sadder than an empty church, so I'm glad this one has new life.
12/16/07
Nice characterization and good descriptions. A bit of work on mechanics and this would really shine. Keep writing!
12/17/07
Good story! There quite a few spelling and punctuation mistakes. Write me a message if you want help correcting them.
I like this. It's good.
12/17/07
Super story! Great job bringing out your MC's character.