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12/16/07
You used some interesting statistics that give force to your argument. You should cite your sources so the reader can have the opportunity to evaluate the figures themselves.
12/16/07
An interesting use of statistics. I agree that it'd be great to have their source.

Inspiring message.
12/17/07
Powerful! I'm interested in where you got your statistics. This is a little preachy, but it has a good message.
12/17/07
Powerful sermon! Very inspiring. I want to be a fire hose!