The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/07
Compelling reading!

An extra "enter" at the end of each paragraph will give you that blank line between which will make your entry easier on the eyes.

I was moved by this account.
12/16/07
Beautiful descriptions and a very touching story. Lovely.
Your descriptions were very vivid. I felt like I was right there. Well done!
12/17/07
Oh...so touching!
Very good descriptions of the sparks flying up into the dark sky!
What did he tell him?! Where are they going to meet?
I love the calm ending. Well done.
12/17/07
Well done! You seem to carry sentiment beautifully and I liked the overall point...It's just a building, the real church sang a hymn together outside.