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This is a very creative piece punctuated with truths. I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!
Amen!!! Nice writing of the truth. Everyday we live for Him as important as the others. By the way, my church this morning is reading these stories as I avoid crowds due to chemo, so thanks for sharing!
Lovely, tender sentiments, and I appreciate the scripture interspersed throughout.

A few of your rhymes seemed a bit forced, and "Bible" should always be capitalized.

Thanks for sharing so many different aspects of church--after reading so many pieces on what is wrong with the church, this was refreshing.
I love this entry. Wonderful work!
I loved this! I loved the verses interspersed to emphasis your thoughts. Capitalize the word "Bible" to show that it is God's Word.
Absolutely beautiful!