The Official Writing Challenge
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your comments though very true are unfortunately very negative and do not offer a solution maybe you could remember the old song of the forties and accentuate the positive, God is still alive and well on planet earth.
12/16/07
I can't disagree with what you've said, but I'd sure like to have seen a balance--many, many churches in America are not like this picture that you have painted here.

It'd be great if you'd separate your paragraphs with a line of blank space, to make it easier to read.

Keep your passion, and keep writing!
Just my opinion, but I think it would be more accurate if you would have said "some" churches are this way. I live in America and my church is nothing like what you describe.

Your writing shows great passion and alot of potential. Keep writing for Him!
12/16/07
Interesting thoughts. You mentioned that the early church didn't have our problems. No... they were persectued and martyred for following Christ.
Good message to wake up believers.