The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/07
Your imagery was wonderful. Just a bit preachy. You have captured what a church truly should be. Good job.
12/15/07
This is an interesting devotional. Watch for the difference between "it's" (it is) and "its".
You have a good descriptive ending.
12/16/07
What an inspiring vision! I like the framework of the angels waiting.

Several times in the body of this devotional you use phrases that are very familiar to most Christians. As some readers will have a tendency to gloss over the familiar stuff, try for fresh and new ways of expressing those ideas.

A well-organized and laid-out piece.