The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/07
Short and sweet, like something you'd see in "Our Daily Bread". When you refer to "some very strange indeed" you might want to give your readers some specific examples of that, as it is a phrase that will intrigue them.
12/14/07
This is a wonderful thought. Perhaps you could describe more details about the Shekinah glory and how it is revealed today.
This would be a good devotional. The only suggestion I would add is to describe what the Shekinah Glory is. Well done, keep writing!
I think this is a good start, but needed more description instead of telling.
01/10/08
Brother, I believe the Holy Spirit has imparted to you much wisdom. May God bless you as you seek Him.