The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/07
I warmed to this personal story. Thanks for sharing.
A sensitive reminder that even worship leaders and their family members are "only human". Good transitions from the various scenes. Thanks for sharing.
Being married to a man willing to pastor his sheep in this loving manner it was heartwarming to hear that there are some that see the love and with continual love and support they find healing! Praise the Lord! This was good to read. Thank you for sharing.
12/10/07
I can tell this was a life changing incident. I suggest you tell it with more dialogue and descriptions. It will help the reader identify with your feelings.
12/13/07
Dear Norma, as I reflect back on those awsome days that we all spent together. Wow! Who would have thought that so many years later,we would be writing about our adventures. It was an extreemly hot baptism of fire for each of us.Many tears were shed through our learning curves,and it was Love that pulled us through.Now through our writings, we can encourage others in their walk. Well done keep those stories comming. Love Ken.