The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/07
I recognized the dilemma about not wanting to go to a home group that was very well expressed. I felt you could have made more of the main character's change of heart. How did it happen?
12/07/07
Beautiful,familiar setting.
12/10/07
This is a good reminder and lesson about what can happen if we're not careful. Your message of what prayer and a right heart-attitude is good. I like Jan's about-face on her willingness to go to their home group. Nice work on this.