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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Home Group (11/29/07)

TITLE: One Voice
By Amy Kuncaitis
12/02/07


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Pastor John peered through his reading glasses on the end of his nose, scanning the page of notes in front of him for what was next on the meeting agenda.

“The next order of business is…let’s see…home group. If you are willing to host a home group this quarter, please raise your hand and tell us a little about what your group will be doing.”

Pastor John’s eyes scanned over the small meeting room filled with twenty or so members of the church planning team.

After a brief pause, Dan’s eyes met the pastor’s.

“Ok, Cindy and I will take a group.”

Dan took a quick glace at his wife for the head nod of approval.

“Our house, Sunday nights, 6:00pm, we will study the book of Matthew for the first quarter. I am pretty sure the Johnsons and the Emersions will be there, they live right up the road from us. There may be a few more from church too, I’ll make some calls tonight.”

Dan and Cindy hosted a home group dozens times before, so they knew the drill.

“Thank you Dan, anyone else?”

Pastor John continued to scan the room.

“Yea, we can take one too. Todd briefly looked up from his notes to nod at Pastor John.

“Let’s see…we can do Wednesday nights at 7:00pm again, does that sound right Pastor?”

Todd buried himself back in his notebook quickly flipping back to the previous year’s notes to get a reference of the logistics of his home group last year.

“I am thinking we can continue our study of the book of Acts, maybe just pick up where we left off in June. I will call my group from last year and let them know we will be starting up again.”

“That sounds great, thank you Todd. We could use one more group…anyone?”

“I’ll take one.”
All heads turned to the back of room where ‘Big Dave’ (as he was lovingly nicknamed) was sitting. This was a first; ‘Big Dave’ had never volunteered to host a home group before. All eyes were fixed on him with anticipation of what he was going to say next.

“I am going to go out and about looking for some people who need Jesus to come to my home group. I am really hoping for some drunks and maybe even some drug dealers.”

‘Big Dave’ sat back in his chair with his normal posture of his arms folded casually while everyone else looked on waiting for what he would say next.

“Well, isn’t that what a home group is all about? We say we want to be the hands and feet of Jesus so let’s go find those who are really lost…come on, we were all lost once right? I want ALL to come and feel welcome at my home group.”

‘Big Dave’s words had left everyone speechless. No one knew what to say but everyone was thinking the same thing. Finally, Dan spoke up.

“Thank you for reminding us why we do home group ‘Big Dave’, I too would like to welcome anyone who needs Jesus into my home.”

Todd looked up from shuffling his notes and as if he had just had a ‘light bulb moment’ he looked over to ‘Big Dave’,

“Me too ‘Big Dave’, me too.”

With a new sense of compassion, Pastor John looked over to ‘Big Dave’ and simply stated:
“…and me too.”

From that day on, home groups were never the same.


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Jan Ackerson 12/07/07
Perfect! For the first half, I was sort of thinking, ho-hum--which is precisely what I was supposed to think! And then you whalloped me with Big Dave and I literally sat up straight, thinking, what's this? Great job!
Brenda Welc12/08/07
This is a great entry! Keep up the writing!
william price12/09/07
I Like Big Dave. A very good story, a little wordy at times. But you communicated what was on your heart excellently. God bless.
Paula Titus 12/09/07
I LOVED Big Dave's comment! Made me smile and think, "Way to go Dave." Great story :)
Temple Miller12/09/07
Good story with a great message! Big Dave teaches us all a lesson.
Joanne Sher 12/10/07
Good for Big Dave - and the others! A nice read.
Sara Harricharan 12/12/07
Great last line! I liked this quick, fresh outlook on home groups. This is one entry I've seen this week that didn't seem to call on 'ordinary' people. Great job.
Tim Pickl12/12/07
This story simply 'brings it home' -- excellent writing -- I hope you graduate soon to the next level!
Sheri Gordon12/12/07
I love 'Big Dave.' You did a good job capturing his character in just a few short dialogue sentences.

I did see a few typos, but those would be easily fixed with another proofing.

'Big Dave' is a nice twist on a "typical" home group. Good job with the topic.
nicole wian12/12/07
We need more Big Daves in our churches. I loved this. It was bold.
Patty Wysong12/12/07
OH, this is Gooooood! The personalities came through loud and clear, as well as the lesson/message. Great job!
LaNaye Perkins12/12/07
This was very, very, very, good. Well done!