The Official Writing Challenge
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Perfect! For the first half, I was sort of thinking, ho-hum--which is precisely what I was supposed to think! And then you whalloped me with Big Dave and I literally sat up straight, thinking, what's this? Great job!
This is a great entry! Keep up the writing!
I Like Big Dave. A very good story, a little wordy at times. But you communicated what was on your heart excellently. God bless.
I LOVED Big Dave's comment! Made me smile and think, "Way to go Dave." Great story :)
Good story with a great message! Big Dave teaches us all a lesson.
Good for Big Dave - and the others! A nice read.
Great last line! I liked this quick, fresh outlook on home groups. This is one entry I've seen this week that didn't seem to call on 'ordinary' people. Great job.
This story simply 'brings it home' -- excellent writing -- I hope you graduate soon to the next level!
I love 'Big Dave.' You did a good job capturing his character in just a few short dialogue sentences.

I did see a few typos, but those would be easily fixed with another proofing.

'Big Dave' is a nice twist on a "typical" home group. Good job with the topic.
We need more Big Daves in our churches. I loved this. It was bold.
OH, this is Gooooood! The personalities came through loud and clear, as well as the lesson/message. Great job!
This was very, very, very, good. Well done!