The Official Writing Challenge
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nicely done! great story line. keep it up!
12/06/07
I wouldn't mind a teensy bit of dialogue sprinkled in, but all in all, I really like this entry~
12/06/07
Great article. It flowed well and really showed great emotion. I could feel Maria's feelings, especially the yearning for Christ in her heart. Great job at showing her different memories. I look forward to reading more of your work. Good Job!
12/08/07
I could feel the emotions in this story, well done.
Your story kept my attention and flowed well. Bible should always be capitalized, and I noticed a few small punctuation errors, but all in all, this is a very strong, touching piece. Keep up the good work!
You did a gret job of expressing your MC's emotions. The story held my interest and blessed my heart. Keep up the great work!
12/14/07
Great job on placing ninth in your level, Jodie!