The Official Writing Challenge
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"A place where more is caught than taught." I love that line. Your story is great and I believe, heartfelt. A little polish and paragraph format are in order,but otherwise, good job. Keep writing, from the heart...
This is a nice story of what it is like to come among believers for those seeking.
12/08/07
Very interesting take on the subject. I would consider breaking up the first paragraph a bit, it's a little overwhelming at first sight. Good writing though, you conveyed your ideas well.