The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/07
I'm a SF/ Fantasy fan and love your world- I remember it from last week even.

I was a little disappointed that the world stopped interacting with the home group- that part became a bit conventional. Could you tell us a bit more about the Manogs and show us how they behave?
12/08/07
Well written, you pulled me right in! Great job!
12/14/07
Congratulations on placing tenth in your level, Mick!