The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful prayer!
12/06/07
I like your story. It is very good for a first entry. Keep writing! :)
12/07/07
well written. you had the group gathered around an everyday phenomena yet didn,t neglect to thank The Lord.
also I loved the way you expressed it all. you made a mundane thing appear beautiful.
12/08/07
This has a very warm feelinig to it. I think you should expand a bit but I lvoed the prayer!