The Official Writing Challenge
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A good pov in this story. I would have liked to learn a little more about the two main characters, but word count was a factor I'm sure.
12/06/07
"His face reflected a hungry soul." I love this line. Love it, love it, love it!
This is good story with a very neat concept. Like it.
12/08/07
Good writing. I like the game idea, very intersting. Great job!