The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
The verdant garden gave way to a rock-strewn hill sprouting a bloodied cross.

- great line! Very powerful..."sprouting" imagine the LIFE that came from that ground!
01/17/05
Very descriptive writing. I could see the pictures in my mind as you if you were drawing it. Thanks for sharing.
01/18/05
Great piece!Well written!
01/19/05
Very good.
01/20/05
Really well written and imaginative. You have chosen some great words to help me see the pictures in my head. Nicely written. Keep up the good work!
01/20/05
Amazing grace how sweet the sound! Very well Written
Awesome. You write with grace and power that paints pictures in the minds of your readers. Wonderful entry. A delight to read.
I loved the great word imagery in your writing. God bless you.
01/24/05
Hello dear DeAnna. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the Level Championships. Well done. Make sure you enter at the Intermediate level from now on. You're definitely up there. Beautiful work. With love, Deb