The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
A lovely illustration of service and how honouring other's feelings can be so important. The service would have meant nothing but for the final twist at the end. Very clever.
11/30/07
You really got me with that last twist--way to go!
12/03/07
Beautiful story that's beautifully written. I love the characters and the twist at the end.
12/03/07
Very sweet - love how you ended it. Nice character development.
Congratulations. I enjoyed this beautiful Christmas story.
12/07/07
Lovely article with a touching ending. Congrats on your placing.