The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
You are also important because you have the gift of storytelling.
11/30/07
The first 3/4 of this was really great--the idea of the Father and the Son talking as the spiritual gifts are given was quite nice. When you started the "dream" bit, you almost lost me...I'll bet you can find a fresher way a concluding this very nice story. Maybe stay with the Father and Son as they observe their servant using her gifts?
12/03/07
Yes, we've all neede that encourager, and it's good to have many who have a servant's heart. Nice story.
12/03/07
Love first part of this - the dream was nice, but, at least in my opinion, weakened the impact a bit. Lovely descriptions, though - and a truly enjoyable read.