The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
I like the repetition of the word "gifts" at the end of each stanza--nice touch.

Some of your punctuation was a little bit confusing, and caused me to have to re-read some sections for the intended meaning.

The ending was a super touch--with Him giving us the gifts.
12/02/07
Love the repetition - and you have some beautiful images. Enjoyed this very much.
12/03/07
Nicely written poem with beautiful imagery. I also like the last line; that's the best gift of all!
12/07/07
Congrats on your placing. Quite an imaginative entry, well done.