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11/30/07
Very interesting story!

Your Christian character (the smart aleck kid) isn't particularly protrayed in a postive light, so I was confused for a while, and I'm not sure of the significance of the last sentence...but you definitely held my interest all the way through.
I too was a bit confused by the the negative profile of both characters. But perhaps that is the way it really happened, or - if fiction - maybe one of your characters decided to act up. :D At any rate it was a rather spell-binding read of biblical proportions.
12/02/07
Very descriptive - a bit hard to follow, but it may have just been me. I was definitely intrigued throughout this piece.
12/04/07
Wow! I like how you brought out the Bible stories where God blinded people to get their attention. I'm confused with the last statement. "The irreligious biology would not emerge again in that room for fifty-nine years, long after Philip had died and the smart-alec who succeeded him had retired. "