The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
I really enjoyed the first half of this--you had a very unique approach. After that, you lost focus a little bit. Definitely good writing, though.
Carrying your theme all the way through to its conclusion would have made this excellent article shine even more.
12/02/07
I can tell you are quite passionate about this - it definitely comes through in your writing. Much to ponder here. Thanks for writing!