The Official Writing Challenge
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I love your images, and the gift of love you so beautifully describe.
The meter, however, could use some work.
I like the way your poem brought to light how little physical appointments matter. Love covers a multitude.
11/30/07
What a lovely, serene poem. Loved the calming rhythm and unforced rhymes.
12/01/07
Wonderful images here - I could picture this very vividly. I truly enjoyed this piece. You put me right in the middle of this scene and made me feel for everyone involved.

I tripped up on the meter a couple places, but it may have just been me.

Wonderfully done - you blessed me today.
12/07/07
Congrats on your placing. This is a beautiful article. At first I thought a church being prepared, but was delighted to see it was feeding the homeless.
I love the pictures you painted for us! So true to life, so vividly described. Keep up the wonderful work.