The Official Writing Challenge
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Thanks for your transparency and sharing your heart and what God has done in your life. One suggestion would be to break up the long paragraphs into more easily digestible, smaller ones. I think you will also find this helpful in organizing your material.

Praise God He has used the bumps in your path to benefit others as well as yourself.
11/30/07
Thanks for sharing this testimony!

One minor thing that stood out as an easy fix was your use of numerals--I believe that numbers under twenty should be spelled out.

I like the way you began and ended with the game show.
12/01/07
What a testimony! I was engaged in your life story throughout - and a great way of opening and closing. The last line is definitely a keeper.