The Official Writing Challenge
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Your testimony is tribute to your wife's good Christian sense and the Lord's ability to use her to His glory. Though I personally don't mind, some would say it is best not to name the topic in your story. In other words to show, rather than explain. The easy conversational tone and your "heart" are indeed pleasant.
11/30/07
I hope you share this tribute with your wife!

You might want to separate it into several paragraphs, and to be a bit more careful with punctuation.

I like your writing style--real and conversational.
12/01/07
I enjoyed this wonderful example - and I can hear your heart for Him, and your wife, loud and clear. Very nice.