The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
ooooo, love that ending!!!!
Nice entry to demonstrate multiple gifts. I think in this instance your dialogue would be more effective if you dropped dialect for all but the waitress. Good conclusion!
11/30/07
Good piece as an introduction to the spiritual gifts. I'm not sure that all of them are often manifested in such a short amount of time, but the piece works, almost as an allegory.
12/01/07
I also love the ending (and therefore the title!) - neat take on the topic overall.