The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
This is a good story to share. The only thing that makes it difficult to read is not putting an extra space between paragraphs. (That is advice I received myself from a higher level writer after my first challenge.)I look forward to reading more of your challenges.
11/30/07
How blessed Sally was to have a friend like Tina!

You should probably put each person's dialogue in a separate paragraph, for the sake of your readers' eyes.



12/01/07
A good story - I felt like I knew these women. Keep writing.
Thank you for the encouragement to be a faithful friend and witness.