The Official Writing Challenge
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Your prose left me with ambivalent feelings. On the one hand I sense it would be more effective broken into smaller bites or even written in poetic form. On the other I can see that much of its purity and integrity lies in the fact that you wrote from the zone. Even so I think the Lord desires for us to comb and shape and burnish our gift to the benefit of those who receive them - and to His glory. Thank you for your transparency and definityel continue to write and hone. Blessings~
Beautifully written...continue to seek Grace.
Beautiful descriptions - very vivid writing.