The Official Writing Challenge
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I am enjoying this series, and your talent at deftly applying the week's topic to your world.
You struck a reflective chord here. Without a spoon of humor to sweeten our lives where would any of us be? Well done!
11/30/07
This story definitely intrigued me. I wish there'd been more space to elaborate on the world - that word count can be a bugger! Very interesting characters, and a wonderful point well expressed. Keep writing!
11/30/07
Very interesting, and told in a unique voice.

A few times you mentioned the "world ending", but it couldn't have ended, could it, with people still alive and in settlements? Maybe some clarification there?

I like your style--keep writing!
12/04/07
Surprising turn with good humor. I really liked it.