The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
Love it! HE is our Gift! Great insight and reminder for all Christians....
Lovely poem to describe the beautiful gift of our Savior.
Pleasant cadence.
11/29/07
I love good poetry so it's a sinch I love this one! Should I take up writing poems for these challenges? Naw! I'll leave it to you.
11/30/07
This is just beautiful. Your imagery is rich and moving. Wonderful.
12/03/07
A poem! I love poems. Although you kept your ryhme and rhythm quite steady, there were a few awkward spots.
I like the beautiful choice of words.
What a wonderful poem filled with beautiful rythym and building excitment
12/04/07
I loved your analogy. Nice lyrical movement.