The Official Writing Challenge
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Bold! Loved the title and the message.
This is so well written. The title grabbed my attention. Then the story grabbed it, too. The detail kept me listening for the next thought. Well done.
11/24/07
Very well written and to the point.
11/24/07
Powerful - love the title, and the repeated references to the art. Great last line too.
11/26/07
Very nice. I especially liked your ending.
Laury
11/29/07
All the way around great writing! Good descriptions -good mix of action and dialogue and good conclusion. I like the title too:)